Disorder Of Attention

I need help cleaning this up – response from Professor: 1) Introduction not clear – specific sentence “Randomized controlled data shows that in 60-70 percent of instances, as identified compared to the same counterparts, childhood ADHD continues into adolescent year and 58 percent of cases when DSM-V guidelines and parental records have been used.” 2) In the objectives section. I wrote the objectives as if I was the one conducting these activities. Help me so it sounds like a conducted review of literature. what are you trying to achieve? 3) Methods section: Describe how articles are selected not what I did. How will you achieve these objectives? 4) Results: What is it that I found. Please see attachment of powerpoint and edit on there for me.