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• The research question
  • Why has the nonprofit sector seemingly failed Haiti and its people to date and what can be done differently to yield more success in the future?
• Haiti: brief background information and context
  • Recorded written history began in 1492 with arrival of Columbus
    • French influence began during early 17^th century
      • Colonial control, sugar and coffee plantations, and slavery dominated for the next 100+ years
    • Haitian slaves began to revolt in 1791 and officially proclaimed independence in 1804
    • First successful slave rebellion and only slave uprising that led to creation of a nation free from slavery and ruled by former captives
  • Aftermath from the revolution and links to current poverty
    • Remnants of social and political patterns established under French colonial rule
      • Free people of color vs. former slaves
    • Refusal of other countries to acknowledge Haiti for fear of similar rebellion
    • 1825: forced to pay France 150 million gold francs for reparations
      • Debt paid in full in 1947
  • Additional factors related to current poverty
    • Long-term US military occupation, 1915-34
    • Duvalier rule and debt, 1957-86
    • Food aid from the US
      • Lack of demand for Haitian farmers
    • Earthquakes, hurricanes, and natural disasters
    • Ongoing political corruption and turmoil
      • Present day situation, re: President Jovenel Moise
    • Others??
  • Current picture of poverty
    • Poorest country in Western Hemisphere
    • 2018 Human Development Index ranking: 168/189
    • ~55% of the population lives below poverty line (<$2.41/day)
    • ~23% live below extreme poverty line (<$1.23/day)
• Why is this research question important in the nonprofit sector?
  • Haiti has been called the ‘Republic of NGOs’
    • More nonprofits per capita than any other country
      • Estimated 3,000+ nonprofits exist; only several hundred registered with government
      • Limited regulation and inconsistent data collection makes it difficult to track effectiveness and identify problem areas
    • Some of these nonprofits have been linked to scandal and/or ineffectiveness
      • Red Cross
      • Oxfam
      • US AID
    • Elevated number of nonprofits + reports of scandal have led to questions about effectiveness and ethics within the sector
  • This research should be important to the nonprofit sector for the purposes of:
    • Determining how these breakdowns and issues were able to initially occur and what factors helped to maintain them
    • Regaining confidence from worldwide stakeholders who may see the situation in Haiti as a stain on the sector as a whole
    • Identifying ways to correct mistakes and pave the way for new, more successful and productive practices to take hold
    • Highlighting the success stories from the sector (which do exist!) and build upon those models moving forward
• Why should this topic be researched?
  • People are suffering and the sector that is supposed to help improve their condition is largely ineffectual and worst case, adding to the problems
  • Long-term patterns of lack of appropriate media coverage, international attention, and focus on the positive aspects of this country and its people have not helped to break the cycle
    • Haiti and its people continue to struggle, appearing to be trapped in an endless cycle of increased foreign aid and dependency on nonprofit organizations for day to day survival
    • The existence of Haiti as a nation is rooted in principles of independence, resilience, and determination
      • Despite the current state of conditions in the country, those values remain intact within many of the inhabitants that currently reside there.
      • The people of Haiti deserve better than the current state of affairs
      • More attention to what is not working and increased efforts to identify alternative, productive approaches need to be made