[SOLVED] edits essay
Im studying for my Writing class and dont understand how to answer this. Can you help me study?
This is very solid work. I like that youve put in a little extra effort to find additional sources on the topic, and you do a fine job of asserting your own position in opposition to Carrs. The one main shortcoming of the paper at the moment is that Im not convinced youre really addressed the central element of Carrs argument. He doesnt worry about the internet damaging our ability to memorize, but rather our ability to read deeply. I think that you can successfully rebut this notion, but youll need to acknowledge and respond to it more directly than you have so far.