[SOLVED] fix my research by fallowing the requirements. my research is about (Upper Cross syndrome)
Need help with my Writing question – Im studying for my class.
the requirements. :
Can you please fix these five things :
* change the topic to (Upper cross syndrome)
* make the aim very clear and add some sentences to it
* Add the Resources .
* add Conclusion.
* you have to Change the way of writing from ( you, we , I or they )
To a third person ) for example
When you say ( it can happen any where from your ribs to your nick ) you should say ( it could happen anywhere from ribs to the nick )
I hope you understand what I mean ask me if you have any questions