[SOLVED] fix my research by fallowing the requirements. my research is about (Upper Cross syndrome)

Need help with my Writing question – I’m studying for my class.

the requirements. :

Can you please fix these five things :

* change the topic to (Upper cross syndrome)

* make the aim very clear and add some sentences to it

* Add the Resources .

* add Conclusion.

* you have to Change the way of writing from ( you, we , I or they )

To a third person ) for example

When you say ( it can happen any where from your ribs to your nick ) you should say ( it could happen anywhere from ribs to the nick )

I hope you understand what I mean ask me if you have any questions