[SOLVED] midterm exercise…………………………………………………………………………………

I’m studying for my English class and need an explanation.

I need you to do a midterm portofolio , there is a sample. and all my work. Write 300 words of vivid description of the place (or places, or choose one) where your narrative takes place. There is a pic with 2 options diagnostic exercise choose one and write it. all of this should 12-13 pages.

Here is a note about my narrative essay

Your narrative sounds more like a list of things instead of telling a story. Try to choose one specific moment that could have some tension and some turn in your journey to move here, and try to use move vivid description of the situation. I appreciate your reflection and you don’t have to worry about language, this is very well written.