Your team’s mission is to revise the following openings so that they are more direct. Remember, time is money in business. These are much too long. They need to be more focused and to the point. Add information if necessary.

I need an explanation for this Business question to help me study.

Your team’s mission is to revise the following openings so that they are more direct. Remember, time is money in business. These are much too long. They need to be more focused and to the point. Add information if necessary.

1-b “My name is Kimberly Sanchez, and I am assistant to the manager of Information Services & Technology at Onyz, Inc. We are interested in your voice recognition software that we understand allows you to dictate and copy text without touching a keyboard. We are interested in answers to a number of questions, such as the cost for a single-user license and perhaps the availability of a free trial version. Will you please answer the following questions.

1-d “I am pleased to receive your inquiry regarding the possibility of my acting as a speaker at the final semester meeting of your business management club on May 2. The topic of online résumés interests me and is one on which I think I could impart helpful information to your members. Therefore, I am responding in the affirmative to your kind invitation.”